Amateur Comics

[No Shelter]

Better Days

http://thebetterdays.proboards79.com/index.cgi

My friend and I were bored, better ones on the way. And if you have ideas, PLEASE TELL ME!!

[Rannos]

The "What the f*ck" comics are hard to understand what exactly you wanted us to see. It seems you were trying to do the Bunny thing from Frozen Reality, but missed the elements that made it interesting. That being a good mix of (funny) randomness, with enough text to allow us to understand the scene.

The first one is actually fairly good though, because the dialog makes it understandable and the randomness makes it funny.

[No Shelter]

Post ideas please, were now taking on some movie and game parodys.

[iRelentless]

The first one was cool. I agree with Rannos about the other 3.

Idea: Something relating to L4D involving a bad (medpack hog, tker, whatever) player, a rifle butt, a fictional smoker tongue and a ton of infected at the bottom of a small pit.

[Shrubberyjsc]

Lol, I second what Rannos ans iRelentless said.

A theme would be a good idea, and what better theme than L4D?

[Asura]

comic of L4D would be cool, make it humor version :P
but not just "what the f*ck" xD

[Dead Fish]

I can strongly feel your dadaistic influences.

[No Shelter]

/bump We have about 9 comics now.

[hooray for zombies]

number 8 was funny, but it seems that the name in number nine reminds me of this: http://www.snafu-comics.com/?strip_id=265

[No Shelter]

Please register and say hi! + give ideas please.

[gorgoth]

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The Bioshock one reminded me of the best part of bioshock ever, when the golfclub --> head.

[Rannos]

Newer ones are better, but less funny and more 'thinky'.

[Shrubberyjsc]

See? Having a definite theme for each comic was a great boost to your........ comics.

Anyway, keep it up.

[No Shelter]

Yay! Thanks.