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tp500
12-04-2007, 09:13 AM
Sooooooo!! I am hoping to become one day a filmmaker and writer, and today in European history I had a sub. So I wrote with the last 1 and a half pages I had in my binder and I really like it.

Im keeping it very simple in terms of why there is a virus. The answer is no one knows. Because my theory is, who the fuck cares, if you're going to go into that much detail and scrutinize a book, dont fucking read it, you wont be entertained.

My story so far is about a couple who hear about a bacterial infection that spread very very quickly and unknowingly on the southern states and the border of mexico. The two shrug it off, which I was hoping would show how death has become so normal for us to see and hear about. I begin trying to attach the characters to the reader and make them as real as I can, since I am a 17 year old writer who hates basically everyone of his writings, but I really dont know what im going to do at one point. Maybe when I post the first chapter and you know what happens Ill point out where I was making my decision. Anyway this is just a heads up cause I'm REALLY fucking critical of my work and I usually write A LOT of stories, and go this is ok, and then 2 seconds later write THIS IS TOTAL SHIT over my page. I've only written an 11 page story in my life. I can't seem to complete much else. BALLS.

PewPew
12-04-2007, 10:30 AM
I wrote a short story too for english. It's 12 pages long and about mutated mad cow, based off of that "5 Reasons the Zombie Apocalypse Could Really Happen" thing.

dontleave
12-04-2007, 10:41 AM
You mean viral?

tp500
12-04-2007, 10:57 AM
Yeah it's viral, but it was a bacteria, I dont fucking know, still working out shit. Anyone know any good editing programs? With sweet fx and stuff.

Teknobry
12-04-2007, 12:09 PM
Try finishing your stories instead of half way through deciding they are sh*t and tearing them up.
You can only get better through experience and practice. You can't have perfection straight away, hard work and perseverence are needed.

Otherwise, we'd all be stephen kings!

Jim_Riley
12-04-2007, 12:13 PM
God, any more zombie stories and I'm going to explode.

tp500
12-04-2007, 01:45 PM
Yes there are many many many many many many many many zombie tales, but many many many many many many many many are so shitty. I hope to make a good one because of that reason. And to Teknobry the reason I name them off as suckage is because of the fact that I know it will be crap. So I just start from scratch until I have something that I like. I want to haunt you until you dont want to have anything to do with zombies.

Eddy_of_the_dead
12-05-2007, 01:00 AM
any more zombie stories and I'm going to explode
booom!