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DeMoNsXWiThInnX
09-26-2008, 10:45 AM
I was writting this and decided to share it with you other 411'ers :D


There once was a man named Andrew. Now Andrew was a very kind and Plesent person who enjoyed his life. Every day after he got out of work he would help others in need with things such as Grocery's and Packages if he saw they needed the help. He had a Wife, and two children named Peter and Samantha. Andrew was 34 years old, his children were 6 and 4. His Wife Michelle had a job as a nurse at the local hospital. Things were looking up for Andrew during those days.

One day Andrew gets out of work and desides to go to the Gym to exercise " Hmm, perhaps ill go work out. "
He was There for about 20 minutes when he herd screams of terror come from the outside. Now Andrew alwasy trying to be a good semariton, he rushed out side to see what had happend. When he ran outside all he saw was alot of blood and a body laynig on the ground. He went to help the person that had fallen on the ground. When he arrived to the body He checked for a pulse. He was frantic and yelled into the crowd.
" No Pulse, Call an Ambulance, hurry!! "

Andrew backed away from the body to regain his breath, at that same moment the young man on the ground opend his eyes and shot up off the ground.
" Sir are you alright!? "
The boy did not answer. Another man next to Andrew went and tapped on the boys shoulder. The boy lounged at the man bitting right into his neck. As the man fell to the ground the boy let out a terrifing scream of horror. The boy charged at a young lady now. While That was going on the Man that had been bitten from the boy arose and Attacked a bystander.

Andrew began running to his Home, All he could here were the terrifing spine chilling screams of the croud. When Andrew got home he Called for his wife and children. They did not answer. He saw on the refrigerator a note that said
" Went shopping with the kids,
be back later. Love You. "
At that point andrew felt a terrible feeling go through his stomach and vomited on the floor.

Andrew locked his doors and waited praying for his wife and Children to be safe. A few hours passed by Andrew sat in his house alone and worried. He turned on the news channle to see if any information had been released. " In other ne-.. Im sorry, Breaking News! It seems there has been numerous people on the street just randomely attacking every one they see, I am told to Tell every to stay in there homes lock there doors and windows untill further notice. Do not and I repeat do not make any contack with the outside!." Andrew in a rush, ran to all of his windows and locked them. As he was doing so he herd this terrifing scream of a man " There here!! There Every wear!! "

Andrew ran and jumped onto his couch, praying that his wife and children were safe. A few more hours went by, Andrew sat lonely and depressed. It was around 1 in the morning and Andrew still herd so many screams of terror in his town . He decided to go to his room and try to sleep " Michelle is smart, she would have found somewear safe with the kids to hide.....I hope. "

Andrew could not sleep though, all he could hear were the terrifing screams of all the local towns folk. Eventully around 2 AM. he fell asleep. The next morning at 8 AM. his alarm clock went off and woke Andrew up. He Checked his answer machine for messages. He had two new messages, he prayed one was from michelle and his children. " You have two new messages. Message 1. Hello Andrew this is a bill collector, we are here to collect a deb--, Message 2. Andrew, the kids and I are locked in a room at the shopping center. I dont think we are going to last much longer. There are a few other people here with me. Those things are outside---. Message at 3:45 AM. End of messages "

Andrew felt a sign of relief finding out his wife and children were safe. At the same moment he noticed it was queit outside. " No more screams? I wonder what happend?" He very slowly opend the side of his curtin to try and see anything. He did not see anything at all. Just Destruction. Andrew ran up to his room and got on his knees looked under his bed pulled out his box. He opend the box and inside was a Glock 9 MM. With one clip in the gun and two on the side. Andrew grabbed his weapon and holsterd it in the back of his pants. He put the two extra clips in his Pockets just incase he needed to use his weapon.

Andrew ran backdown stairs, he unlocked his door and opend it very slowly and cautiously. He opend the door just enough to get a peek outside. " Coast is clear " he thought to himself. He slowly stepped out onto his porch, locked his door behind him. Andrew then walked off his porch and began walking on the sidewalk. The town was like a ghost town know one was in sight. He got to the sidewalk and checked his surroundings. There was destruction all around him, Broken glass , Papers all over the street and blood. " what the hell happend yesterday? " He continued to walk down the street. With everystep Andrew took looking at all the destruction he began to loose faith that any one was alive. He reached a four way. not one thing to be seen except destruction and the smell of fire.

Andrew had now made it back to the gym wear he saw the first of the attacks begin. He looked around. He saw holes in windows smashed cars. and blood. There was blood every wear he looked. He continued walking, He saw a police car on the road with the door opend. Andrew walked to the car to try and find anyother weapons. He had no luck. He continued to walk. Now he was at the center of town by all the grocery store's and shopping centers. He saw no one in sight just smashed up cars and more destruction. He desided to enter the 7/11 to look for some survivors. As he entered he herd the local radio playing a song he was familiar with. He checked out all the rooms but found no one. Apon leaving he grabbed a twix. He continued to walk through he town entering stores looking for survivors. But had no luck.

Andrew then decided to go on the Wise Shopping center. When he enterd he felt the air conditioner " Ahh the feels nice. " He then enterd the store and began walking through. He was checking an isle when he herd a slight moan. Andrew took out his weapon, he began walking to wear he had herd the moan. He found a man on the ground. " Sir are you alright!?! " the man answerd " yeah, yeah, I am fine. Those damn crazy people have been trying to get in here all night." Andrew replied " All Night?" The man said " Yeah all night but around 5 AM they all left and I unlocked the doors to check outside. I guess I forgot to lock them again." " Sir have you seen a women in her late twenty's around 5'7, 143 pounds, with brown hair down to her neck? " No im sorry I havent" " She was wearing a necklace with a Dimond on it" " Ohhh wait, now that youve mentiond the Necklace, Yes i do believe ive seen her. Was she with two children? " Yes, Yes!. those are my children! do you know wear I can find her?" " Well she is in the Back room over there." " OK thank you sir."

Andrew ran to room. " Michelle, Michelle?" " Andrew is that you?" " yeah baby its me" Michelle opend up the door and on site Hugged Andrew with all her might. " Oh my god, I was terribly worried about you Andrew." " Im find, how are you and the children doing?" " were alright, do you know what happend out there?" " Im not sure, people just began attacking other people. I ran home to find you and the kids but i found the note"

At that moment The man Andrew found earlier said " guys come here, quick! " They ran over to him and saw on the camera's an old women straggling along. She looked to her left and Screamed. She was attacked by two of the crazy people. " Lets go get her." Andrew said " No wait! Ive seen this before. " After she was attacked in no less then 20 seconds the lady arose and began acting terribly violent, and screaming perfusly. she took off screaming and acting like she was in a trance. A type of rage.

Andrew said " It seems whenever some one who isnt crazed and gets bitten by some one who is gets changed in no longer then 20 seconds. Then they become crazed. And it seems that are entire town has been changed into theses crazed beasts. The only way to stop them is to shoot them down I guess." Andrew holsterd his pistal in his pants once again. " are there anymore survivors here?" " Yeah theres about ten of us." Said the store owner. "Does any one have any weapons?" one of the survivors replied back " Well I have a knife, but that wont do any good." Andrew thought for a few seconds and checked the secrutiy cameras. " I need some one to go with me" " Go with you wear?" " Over to the gunshop" the other survivor said " No way man, its way to dangerous out there." " I have one pistal, when those hings break in here thats not ganna do anything." "I will go " said a youg boy. He looked like he was in his teens mabey sixteen or seventeen. " Are you sure?" " Yeah im positive, I dont want to be trapped in here with no defence." Andrew said alright lets go before more of those "infected" show up".

Andrew and the boy walked outside, there were no infected in site. Andrew asked the boy what his name was the boy replied. "My name is Jeff" " Nice to meet you Jeff im Andrew" " yeah, Same to you" Andrew and Jeff quickly ran to the gunshop. When they arrived they tried to get in but the doors were locked. " well this is a problem." Then Jeff said " wait...the roof. theres an opening on the roof." " How do you know that?" " Well, I tried to steal some gun's from here once or twice." Andrew looked at him in a type of shock. " well whatever, I will lift you up onto the roof. You get in and unlock the doors for me". Andrew lifted Jeff up onto the roof. " Do you see anything?".. Jeff couldent hear Andrew as he was already jumping down the roof hatch.

Jeff reached the doors of the shop and opend them for Andrew. " Alright lets hurry and gather as much as we can. They ran in Grabbed every pistal they could, they gatherd as much ammo as they could. They put the pistals in the duffle bag as well as one shot gun. In the second dufflebag they had one shotgun two hunting

DeMoNsXWiThInnX
09-26-2008, 10:46 AM
and a 357. Magnum. They were also able to get two assault rifle's, there was no room in the bags so Jeff, and Andrew carried them.

When they exited the store they barley made it 10 feet when Jeff triped over the duffle bag he had. He stumbled into a parked car. The Car alarm went off. There were Violent screams all around. " Run!!!" Andrew and Jeff ran as fast as they could to get to the Weis shopping center but were to slow, as the infected cought up to them and had them surrounded. " SHOOT!" Jeff and Andrew opend fire on the infected dropping as many as they could. Jeff wasnt a very good shot with the gun, but being there were surounded all he had to do was hold the trigger an and move around a bit, so Jeff was doing his part. Andrew on the other hand, was a good shot and knew how to shoot a gun. Ammo was a factor in this role. They did not have enough time to reload, and they both ran out of ammo around the same time with more infected coming. They did not know what to do, they thought they were gonners. When out of know wear they herd gun shots and all the infected just dropped. Andrew and Jeff looked around. They saw a group of military soldiers. The soldiers were heavily armor'ed, and well equiped with military rifles and pistals. Andrew and Jeff could not see the soldiers faces because they were coverd by gas mask's. The soldiers asked. " Are you to alright?" "Yeah were fine, thanks. Thank god you came when you did or else we would have been running along with those things." ''Hey were did you get those weapons?" " well we kind of took them from the gun shop." "Your lucky that there are crazy infected people running around or else we would arrest you. Now with that being said, are you to the only survivors in the area?" " No there are a few more of us in the Weis shopping center. Thats wear we were going when we were attacked." " Well then lets hurry up and get there, you can get a ride with us." "Thank you sir."

The soldiers went to the shopping center with Andrew and Jeff. When the arrived the store owner opend the door. " Who are these guys?" Andrew replied "There with us, the saved us from a bunch of infected." Andrew, Jeff, and the soldiers walked in. Andrews children ran up and hugged Andrew as Andrew hugged them back. The soldiers began talking to the other survivors. " OK, lets all introduce our selves." "Im Kathy Harris." " Hi Kathy" "Im Doug Tompson" " Hello Doug." "Im Jeff, and ive been sober for two weeks" "Hi jeff" " Im Andrew. and this is my wife Michelle and my two children Peter and Samantha." " Hey everyone" "Ok now the soldiers and myself will introduce oursleves." " I am Jake, Jake Sabers." "You can call me Ray, Gamma Ray, Naa im kidding, im Ray." "My name is Steve." "And I am Commanding officer, my name is A.J"

After every one got to know a little about each other they began discussing a plan on how they should escape or get out of town. " Well the other soldiers and myself have two Hum-V's. Both with mounted machine guns and there will be enough room for all of you. Doug replied. "Yes but how do you know if the infection hasnt spread through all of our surrounding area's yet?" The soldier replied. "Well we dont, were just going to have to risk it." "Well why not send only a few people instead of every one, just incase the other areas are infected and then non of us have a chance of survival." "Well, I supose thats a good idea, but what if we get trapped and have no way to get back. You might think we have been infected when we really are not. " Your soldiers dont you have Walky talkys or something?" "OK. I guess we are set then." " Jake,Ray,and Doug." Dough replied " Me!? Why me?" " Becuase you seem to know stratagy, and if our boys get in a problem you'll know what to do." " I guess your right."

So the three men went to look around on foot. They decided to go the nearest town to see what it looked like. They arrived there with no trouble. When they arrived to the next town they wernt to lucky. *on walky* " Doug,how are things looking over there?" "Umm not to good sir." " What do you mean?" "well, theres alot of destruction and blood. Its quiet tho, very quiet." "Damnit Prepair for battle, one little noice you make those things are just come crawling in!" " Shit, are you serius!?" *Car alarm goes off* " God Damn Birds!!" " Lock and Load men!"

Sure enough the infected came rushing in by the hundreds. The three men came together facing different ways. " Open Fire!" The three men began to shoot perfusley. The shots and screams could be herd all that way back at the shopping center. " Damn it there closing in!" " Reloading, cover me!" The three men had each others back's but it seemed there was no ending to the infected.

*Back at the shopping center* " We have to go help them" " No there is no saving them, they were good men and good friends." *The shooting stops* "Doug, Doug, come in Doug over.......Come in Doug over."......" Im Here" " Thank god" " How are the men" "..We..Lost..Ray" "Well head on Back you two,good job out there."Jake and Doug headed back to the shopping center. When they arrived things wernt to good there either as infected were trying to break into the store. "A.J, We will destrac them away from the doors" "No its to dangerous you wont survive." "Well, we will cross that bridge when it comes. Just make sure when they get away from the doors you give us Backup!" "Alright, do your best." "Heyyyy * shoots gun* Over here!" The infected have taken the bate and now are all going after Jake and Doug. " Well here goes nothing" Jake and Doug begin to shoot at the infected. The other survivors open the doors and begin giving suport fire to doug and Jake. They kill all the infected in the area. There safe for now.

"Few that was a close one." "Come on you two, come back in." Jake and Doug head back into the shopping center. They begin talking about what they have seen. "Well, in short terms...Were screwed. There was nothing there except destruction and death. "What do you mean?" "well, you know how you enter a town or city you see the scene that says Welcome to where ever right? That sign was coverd in blood. We continued walking in to the town. There were no survivors. There were turned over vehicals, fires all over the place, and the place as coverd in garbage. We were walking when a flock of birds flew in and a couple landed on car which set off the alarm which sent all the infected coming right for Ray,Jake and I. We began to shoot. It seemed the like the hored of infected was limetless. It seemd like it was all of that town. And ours. We did not have enough ammo, so we decided to make a run for a close by allyway we saw to reload our weapons. When we reached the ally way we tried to reload but the infected were to fast. and cornerd us. Ray took out his pistal and chared into the infected full force to push one side of them back to give us time to reload. We were able to reload but Ray had been infected and joined the swarm of infected we were shooting at. We saw a nearby dumpster and climbed ontop of it, then we scrambled our way onto the roof. I dont know how we made it up there without the infected getting to us. We through to granades down in the ally way. and took out a lot of the infected there. We then ran from roof to roof when we got back here and saw the infected trying to break into the store. Thats basically the entirety of what happend." A.J replied "Well your safe now, but we still dont know how to escape this god forsaken city." "What do you mean the city? We have to get some wear far from here, like a new country. It has prabably already spread through our entire state. It has been 14 hours since the out break occured and the infection has spread across multiple town's already. "I sopose you are right Doug, but how are we going to make it an airport to find a helicopter, or an airplane?"

DeMoNsXWiThInnX
09-26-2008, 10:47 AM
To be Continued :D

Z2ato
09-26-2008, 01:08 PM
Cool thanks

Xaos Falcon
09-26-2008, 02:55 PM
grammar plox

TheDisturbedZombie
09-27-2008, 07:07 AM
Not bad but your spelling is horrible